I (sort of) Don’t Get Poetry (and that’s okay)

When I say I don’t get poetry, I don’t mean I don’t enjoy it.  I like it a lot.  I just don’t really know the difference between good and great poetry.  What I do get is feels from some poetry, and I tend to like that poetry.  My aunt Joanie writes what I define as good poetry.  When I read it, I can imagine things – a walk through nature, time spent with someone I love.

I certainly don’t know how to write it.  But before I got sick I saw part of the Mr. Roger’s documentary (aka best movie of the year even though I haven’t finished it [yes I know I’m a monster {how do you annotate a double nested parenthetical with?}]).  It reminded me of the times I’ve been sick as a kid – a lot of those times I spent imagining stories.  And I did the same thing this time.  Except I also imagined a poem.  Which I forgot, mostly.  What I remembered I scribbled down here for your amusement.  I didn’t finish it because I don’t know how to write poetry.  If you don’t like it, don’t worry – I don’t write poetry often.  And when I do, I don’t finish it, apparently.

 

In the still, quiet pain

A voice whispers

A universe unfolds

Atop the folds of my bed sheets

 

Countless worlds fill the sky

From where I lie

None of them knows

I can see their story

 

Some like my own

Others a stark contrast

A blazing fire

Against a still, quiet lake

 

The ones that remain

Bring tears of joy

Tears of pain

Reminders of

 

 

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2 Replies to “I (sort of) Don’t Get Poetry (and that’s okay)”

  1. My dear Donovan all writing from the heart is good poetry! Love your poetry this morning ~ Aunt Joanie

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